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Friday, 9 December 2016

Field Trip


Field Trip

Being in Field Trips are awesome
because you get to ride a bus, have more time with your friends and also you get to have your parents with you.

Monday, 21 November 2016

Amazing Top Team

Amazing Top Team

*Splash!* ugh! Was what I heard from Mrs McG at the water station yesterday during Top Team. The senior syndicate all took part in fun games Yesterday at school.

Top Team is supposed to be a game of teamwork, first thing that we do is Mr. Breach chose our groups, after that my group was Lucy, Josh, John, Cameron, Gerald and me.
Our group number was number four, We started with  number 2 it was a game like Jenga we won Cameron was a lot of help by holding the Jenga carefully, second game was a balancing game I went first I was confident there is three course it was the hill, the spikes and the the moving plank I made it so far we were winning, I got wet because there was water in them and Nicki put holes in them I was soaking wet but I did it for my team!

After playing all of the games the bell ringed we went to the shade and thank Khan the leader of the Top team all of the teams said "THANK YOU KHAN FOR PLAYING TOP TEAMS WITH US!" and when the bell ring we eat our  lunch I was thinking of Top Teams for Next Year I hope it gonna be more fun!

Monday, 14 November 2016

Bulls Eye


This is a Mechanism Part I made it it looks cool and I love it so much I didn't get to do it by my self my friend John helped me he help me by the colour and the size it also look like pizza! I made this because I want to be different than every one!





Monday, 7 November 2016

Friday, 21 October 2016

Dogs & the Fogs Persuasive Writing

We have been learning how to write persuasive pieces of writing. We had to continue Miss Mcleod to either get a cat or a dog. I chose to persuade Miss Mcleod to get a dog. This is my persuasive writing. I had to use persuasive writing words to use persuasive words and phrases that were convincing.

I leaned the word called Persuade.
I enjoyed writing this poem for dogs.


Collaborative Success Criteria
  • The correct structure of a persuasive text including an introduction, with a hook and your opinion, 3 body paragraphs and a conclusion.
  • Persuasive vocabulary and phrases that convince people
  • The reasons why with supporting ideas

Dogs & the Fogs

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Did you know that you that dogs are really useful for keeping burglars away. I think Miss McLeod should have a dog because they are playful, you can train them and teach them tricks and they are protective.

Firstly I think Misss McLeod should buy a pet dog because these fluffies  are playful because they entertain by playing with the visitors, they entertain you by playing fetch with you. You can also take them to the park! And play with you like chasing each other around the park.

Secondly Dogs can learn tricks by giving them a item on a paper and they will get it for you it will only follow if you train them or give them a treat for doing that, they can also eat when they are a standing on their feet while they hold their food from their paws.

Lastly they are protective, by protecting themselves and they protect you, by barking at the burglars or they look around your house for other burglar they can also smell them out or they can warn you by coming to you and bark at you.

Overall I think Miss McLeod needs to get a dog because they are playful trained and they protect you!