We have been learning how to write persuasive pieces of writing. We had to continue Miss Mcleod to either get a cat or a dog. I chose to persuade Miss Mcleod to get a dog. This is my persuasive writing. I had to use persuasive writing words to use persuasive words and phrases that were convincing.
I leaned the word called Persuade.
I enjoyed writing this poem for dogs.
Collaborative Success Criteria
- The correct structure of a persuasive text including an introduction, with a hook and your opinion, 3 body paragraphs and a conclusion.
- Persuasive vocabulary and phrases that convince people
- The reasons why with supporting ideas
Dogs & the Fogs
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Did you know that you that dogs are really useful for keeping burglars away. I think Miss McLeod should have a dog because they are playful, you can train them and teach them tricks and they are protective.
Firstly I think Misss McLeod should buy a pet dog because these fluffies are playful because they entertain by playing with the visitors, they entertain you by playing fetch with you. You can also take them to the park! And play with you like chasing each other around the park.
Secondly Dogs can learn tricks by giving them a item on a paper and they will get it for you it will only follow if you train them or give them a treat for doing that, they can also eat when they are a standing on their feet while they hold their food from their paws.
Lastly they are protective, by protecting themselves and they protect you, by barking at the burglars or they look around your house for other burglar they can also smell them out or they can warn you by coming to you and bark at you.
Overall I think Miss McLeod needs to get a dog because they are playful trained and they protect you!
