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Friday 2 June 2017

Antarctica


Title
Jesmer Antarctica
Introduction
Cold, Desert,
Characteristic
Ginormous, Freezing, Animals live there.
Evaluation
Cool
Draft Writing
Antarctica is a cold desert. It is a ginormous, freezing, and even animals lives there. Antarctica is the coldest and whitest place in the world it is also the windiest place. And when you think is cold the temperature doesn’t go up but the wind level does. When the snow comes down the ice is packed together, then when the packed ice slides down the water it becomes a glacier which turn into an iceberg in a couple of days. I think that Antarctica is cool because I never knew that it was an island underneath the Antarctica.

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